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Bonjour Pouvez vous me corriger mon texte en Anglais s'il vous plait?

Hi I'm the superstar Ronald Mac Donald's, and of course I'm for fast food!
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In my opinion, if no-one comes at your restaurent it's just because you don't have any mascot. And besides! no body have a mascot like me, because I'm the best! All children love me!
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I'm agree with Aaron on macdo the foods tastes good and people are well fed! Morover on MacDo there is a really good atmosphere. Children eat,play and laugh with me! And even adults have good time for away from the stress daily!
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Really?! I don't share the same point of view! I belive that if you comes at MacDo from time to time you can't became obese! Do you find me obese? Yet I eat on MacDo every Saturday and Sunday a Happy meal! And,I'm perfect health!

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  • *restaurant
    *any mascots
    *nobody has
    *I agree
    *the food tastes good
    *Moreover
    *in Macdo
    *adults have a good time away from the daily stress
    *if you come
    * And I'm perfectly healthy

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