Bonjour, pouvez vous m'aidez s'y vous merci beaucoup: Je vous ai mis les modèle de mon cahier je n'arrive pas

Dear uncle Barry,

We arrived two days ago at Édimbourg by the ferry. First, we went to the hotel to unpack our things and the teacher gave us a quick reminder of what we were going to do in the week.
As we arrived late in the evening, we ate and then directly went to sleep. Then, yesterday we went visiting the town; we started with the Old Town; it was amazing ! There was thins huge castle that went around it and we visited the cathedral St Gilles and the Scotland royal museum.
People here are very nice and they have an odd accent, it's so funny !
Write back soon
Love,
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